building section representation board

[tatyb295]

Good morning, everyone. I'm designing a concrete building and I wanted to know if I correctly designed the cover part in the sections. in particular the cover must be in wood with external part in pieces, so I used as a retino for the perimeter walls the concrete and for the covering that of the wood. Would the design be correct?

 

[thelittlesniper]

I suppose it's a design for school, otherwise the roof package would be quite strange!
in any case the question is not very clear: Are the retinals, the loft package or the roof representation?

 

[tatyb295]

How strange?
However I wanted to know whether I correctly performed the representation of the section in the upper part where the walls intersect with the loft or if I correctly used the retini (and then to create that net line of separation between concrete and wood).

 

[thelittlesniper]

How strange?
However I wanted to know whether I correctly performed the representation of the section in the upper part where the walls intersect with the loft or if I correctly used the retini (and then to create that net line of separation between concrete and wood).

strange in the sense that it is not a "media" composition of a roof. If you are looking for google you will notice that a wooden roof and tiles is usually composed of several layers and, at least, by: carrying beams, axle, waterproofing sheath, strips and finally the hoods. without considering particular layers such as internal finishing, insulation, etc...

so represented, as it is designed everything, seems correct. even retinals, if listed in a legend or, specified on the design with appropriate annotations of the materials, are fine.
do you call the sections aa, bb etc.? because it is not clear what is b, d and x in the plant. Moreover the section line would normally be indicated with tract-point type line.

 

[Cristallo]

the plugs (though it is only a retino, therefore a mere symbolic representation) are exaggerated. a cluster in reality will be 20cm wide. Yours is as wide as the window.
litthesniper is right to sell. a wooden loft has primary edge (wood beams) secondary ornamentation (traverse partitions), closing axle (otherwise it would be an open grating) on which the coups are rested by appropriate hooks (generally of cross-cut strips to the line of the plugs).
if you see the plugs in the plant it is correct that you see them in section, but if you see the plugs in section, then see also the secondary odour etc.
search for some image of a wooden roe, for clarifications.

Regardless of the purely graphic representation, this cover, as it is made (or simply as it is represented) will not stand on even 7 days.
Just put a colombo in the center, which opens like a crush. 8-9m light with subhorizontal pattern. . .
It could work if it was a heavily armed, not wooded fullsole.

on the section I see a balcony and a terrace beyond the tilted cover, which in the plant do not appear. What have they done?