opinions on a work report

[jhonny2727]

Hello, I am new, today I have known the forum.
I wanted to have opinions from you on a job I'm going to have to submit to an exam.
the work in question is a ring (ring jail) I am inspired by a "gabbia" containing a beads.
I look forward to your criticism, thank you in advance.
I attach files.

 

[TECNOMODEL]

would you like an aesthetic assessment or 3d model? I mean how it is made, surface quality etc.

 

[jhonny2727]

I would need both of you, thank you for your interest

 

[TECNOMODEL]

aesthetically, in my opinion, the ring is beautiful. I like the background, I find it cold.
on the ring it seems to me that the passage between the zone in shadow and full light is a little too net, I would shade it a little.
But it counts that it is a personal opinion and that I do not make rendering, so I only value according to my tastes.

on model 3d you should post it, otherwise it is impossible to give an assessment.
post it in neutral format or in a "old" version of rhino, so that it can open even those who do not have rhino 5.